Re: Incredible Aussie rescue, Melbourne to Port Fairy
I agree - reads / sounds like the writer is warming up for a novel - bits like below just do not sit right.
Originally Posted by John B
'With decades of experience behind him, Ross could be relied on to remain cool and calm at all times. His unflinching resolve would be essential as events unfolded'
'His quiet “can do” attitude and his strength and agility meant he would play a key role in the way the crew responded to the events that were to come'
'The main event was about to commence'
"Old boats are like teenage girlfriends: there is a certain urgency to their needs & one neglects them at one's peril"